someplace else
intertwined
with my very being
i carry you
everyplace i go
you are
my silent shroud
my only wish
my lacuna
you are all
i have ever known
it is in you
that i found home
you know that i try
to live and love
but i sometimes feel
too far gone
i define, i label
but it doesn't set me free
and though you are here
i still cannot see.
with my very being
i carry you
everyplace i go
you are
my silent shroud
my only wish
my lacuna
you are all
i have ever known
it is in you
that i found home
you know that i try
to live and love
but i sometimes feel
too far gone
i define, i label
but it doesn't set me free
and though you are here
i still cannot see.
posted by sattva at 2:31 AM
7 Comments:
"i define, i label"
I am reminded of school. Every summer I bought a new set of books for the next year, and spent a couple of days just covering and labeling them. Every year.
Old habits, they say,....
beautiful =)
vb, that's SUCH a special memory! i of course left it all to the last day, and then there was panic. fun times.
thanks dolphin, and thank u for visiting.
"and though you are here
i still cannot see"
Don't be hard on yourself...that you can't see isn't your fault. It's his/her's :-)
But seriously...reads very nicely but I'm not sure I feel the same about this (if I'm reading it correctly) :-)
ghost, thanks :) the 'you' refers to a place. only the last 'you' refers to a 'being'. but you are welcome to take out of it what u wish, and to disagree wholeheartedly :)
another very nice one, s.
thanks g.
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